Plans for Revision
I now have my research proposal outlined with an abstract written. My plans for revisions are to go in and expand on a few ideas that I didn't explain enough. I'm also going to be designing my research methods and making sure I have a good system of analysis for that. I'm going to go into my Literature Review section and combine some paragraphs together so that they communicate one idea at a time. Then I'm also going to add two more sources so that it's thoroughly researched.